T E Aby =burningmonkCommentsThank you for the critique! I really like how you dissected the geometry of the photo. Photographs are geometry and emotion in a single moment.
I'm with on the minor itch. Perhaps I could have taken a step forward, past the pole and then only the curtain would have been framing them. That would have made for a much more pleasing red border around the scene. But, live and learn! Thanks again! |
A very minor itch? (for lack of a better word) is how the red curtain on the left mixes with the maroon cushion below it. The beige sign(?) is also mixing with the tatami. Again, it's not a flaw, it just catches my eye. In a way, it also draws you into the scene.